Post by Lani on Oct 13, 2007 2:01:18 GMT -5
Listen this time.
Idea for a haunt,
Okay so when you first walk up there's a fountain, but not one of those gay ones that have blood coming out, vomit is coming out of this one there are a few chunks of human (if we can eat meat why don't we eat each other, we're meat too.) flesh in it, the fountain isn't made of bones, nor is it messed up, just a little messed up from stomach acid and from being oldish, it smells a bit like vomit but not so much that it over whelms you and makes you puke too.The front of the hospital isn't to over done, no 'Stay out' signs or 'Beware' signs, just evidence of a few suicides, fingers nails and teeth are scattered here and there, some have the flesh still on them, some have the little bits of flesh rotting off, faint images of blood spatter and pools of blood that look like they've tried to be scrubbed off are found around, you can't see inside most of the windows, most of them have bars on them, some are cracked, some are completely smashed, you can see people running by the smashed widows, some of the bars are rusting off (the widows will be closed off to guests so the people out side don't see the guests inside) There are fingers and toes that have been caught in the bars. The door looks like any other door except for the fact that it has a huge hole in it, on the roof there's a dead, rotting body, it's to far up so it's hard to see. When you come in there's no one to say 'Leave' or 'Go back' just a gunned down nurse hanging over the edge of a termite infested desk, in the lobby there are a few corpses in chairs, magazines on their laps, the magazines are a strange color because they've soaked up the rotting fluids that the corpses seem to be nearly bursting with, they seem to be looking around a bit, flinching at times, maybe even groaning. In the hall there are two people writing messages to each other on the walls in their own blood (Get some kind of weird blood machine maker thing? ) they're not laughing hysterically or insanely, just laughing at you for some reason, the hall in very small so you have no choice but to get close to these people. In the next room, it looks just like any hospital room should, except for the the person eat the guts of another person, there are signs that there was a struggle, smeared blood, the person eating the other person looks like they had been hurt, of coarse they're both covered in blood, the person getting eating is looking around aimlessly, almost pleading for help they look so pathetic, The person eating is to into their meal that they don't even notice the people walking by, not even glancing no matter how much noise they make. The next room there is a woman who's face in half cut off and still dangling by the skin, you can see her veins, little teeth marks coming through the thin flesh, she was trying to get a plastic surgery, she is asking the guests where the doctor has gone, to drugged by the stuff they gave her to fall asleep that she doesn't even notice her face is half falling off, there are tools that have blood on them from the unfinished operation, there is a blood trail leading out another door that guests can't get through, it's obviously the missing doctor's blood. The final room there are news paper clippings of pictures of murder scenes and psychopaths, there are projectors on the ceiling showing horror movies' most gory, brutal scenes, there is sound but most of it is blocked out by a woman screaming at the top of her lungs in the corner, she putting her hands over her eyes and face as if she's trying to block out the movies and sound and everything, the room would be pitch black if the movies hadn't been playing on the walls.
I'm not a pro at this or anything, hell I've never really tried writing something like this in my life, but just tall me if it's good or not please?
Idea for a haunt,
Okay so when you first walk up there's a fountain, but not one of those gay ones that have blood coming out, vomit is coming out of this one there are a few chunks of human (if we can eat meat why don't we eat each other, we're meat too.) flesh in it, the fountain isn't made of bones, nor is it messed up, just a little messed up from stomach acid and from being oldish, it smells a bit like vomit but not so much that it over whelms you and makes you puke too.The front of the hospital isn't to over done, no 'Stay out' signs or 'Beware' signs, just evidence of a few suicides, fingers nails and teeth are scattered here and there, some have the flesh still on them, some have the little bits of flesh rotting off, faint images of blood spatter and pools of blood that look like they've tried to be scrubbed off are found around, you can't see inside most of the windows, most of them have bars on them, some are cracked, some are completely smashed, you can see people running by the smashed widows, some of the bars are rusting off (the widows will be closed off to guests so the people out side don't see the guests inside) There are fingers and toes that have been caught in the bars. The door looks like any other door except for the fact that it has a huge hole in it, on the roof there's a dead, rotting body, it's to far up so it's hard to see. When you come in there's no one to say 'Leave' or 'Go back' just a gunned down nurse hanging over the edge of a termite infested desk, in the lobby there are a few corpses in chairs, magazines on their laps, the magazines are a strange color because they've soaked up the rotting fluids that the corpses seem to be nearly bursting with, they seem to be looking around a bit, flinching at times, maybe even groaning. In the hall there are two people writing messages to each other on the walls in their own blood (Get some kind of weird blood machine maker thing? ) they're not laughing hysterically or insanely, just laughing at you for some reason, the hall in very small so you have no choice but to get close to these people. In the next room, it looks just like any hospital room should, except for the the person eat the guts of another person, there are signs that there was a struggle, smeared blood, the person eating the other person looks like they had been hurt, of coarse they're both covered in blood, the person getting eating is looking around aimlessly, almost pleading for help they look so pathetic, The person eating is to into their meal that they don't even notice the people walking by, not even glancing no matter how much noise they make. The next room there is a woman who's face in half cut off and still dangling by the skin, you can see her veins, little teeth marks coming through the thin flesh, she was trying to get a plastic surgery, she is asking the guests where the doctor has gone, to drugged by the stuff they gave her to fall asleep that she doesn't even notice her face is half falling off, there are tools that have blood on them from the unfinished operation, there is a blood trail leading out another door that guests can't get through, it's obviously the missing doctor's blood. The final room there are news paper clippings of pictures of murder scenes and psychopaths, there are projectors on the ceiling showing horror movies' most gory, brutal scenes, there is sound but most of it is blocked out by a woman screaming at the top of her lungs in the corner, she putting her hands over her eyes and face as if she's trying to block out the movies and sound and everything, the room would be pitch black if the movies hadn't been playing on the walls.
I'm not a pro at this or anything, hell I've never really tried writing something like this in my life, but just tall me if it's good or not please?
